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55 Fiction on Sunday

55-Fiction on Sunday? Who knows? It could become a habit. πŸ˜‰

no denial

And before I knew I had hit ‘send’.  I experienced disbelief at my decision. Then a sense of loss and finally relief.  It was time to let go. Yes, we had had good times. But I didn’t need him any more. “Be happy” I whispered and pictured the little girl  thrilled with her ‘new’ computer.

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And before I knew I had hit ‘send’.  Would he respond? Was the profile picture what he really looked like?  I couldn’t stop thinking of him.   I had to know if he was the ‘one’. The last time I had seen him was when the nurse took him away from my arms. My little Roshan.

 

 

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative  by BlogAdda

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31 Comments

  1. Joyce Joyce September 29, 2013

    Must be a tough one.

  2. sridevi sridevi September 26, 2013

    Loved both the 55ers . Letting go is such a difficult thing isn’t it ? <3

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | September 26, 2013

      Thanks, Sri. Yes, letting go is so hard, but always worth it!

  3. Jyothi Nair Jyothi Nair September 25, 2013

    Loved both the letting go and the anticipation. Beautifully written. πŸ™‚

  4. Meena Menon Meena Menon September 23, 2013

    OMG the last one is so poigant .. the possiblities are unimaginable!

  5. Alka Alka September 23, 2013

    You are so good at it. Loved both of them.

  6. Sheela Sheela September 23, 2013

    Both are lovely…but I liked first one at the first place…

  7. Bhavya Bhavya September 23, 2013

    Aww πŸ™‚ Both such sweet pieces!

    The WOW theme this week was indeed very tempting, but by the time I read the topic, the weekend was already over πŸ˜›

    • Bhavya Bhavya September 23, 2013

      Couldn’t share your post on twitter! Wonder why :/

  8. Shilpa Garg Shilpa Garg September 23, 2013

    I can imagine the little girl’s happiness on seeing her new computer!! Loved both the 55ers! πŸ™‚

  9. Shiva Shiva September 23, 2013

    smart and sweet… loved the first one.

  10. Suzy Suzy September 23, 2013

    Very sweet stories. Hard to pick which one I liked better – loved them both.

  11. Aditi Aditi September 22, 2013

    Very sweet 55ers…esp loved the second one! N 55 fiction on Sunday…yeah it could become a thing!! πŸ™‚

  12. Naina Madan Naina Madan September 22, 2013

    Good job done, Corinne. I loved the second one more.
    I so hope to write one soon. Missed my chance when Vidya gave a tutorial due to work pressures.
    Some day soon. Till then, you all should do justice to her masterclass! πŸ™‚

  13. Kathy Kathy September 22, 2013

    I loved your story!! I hope her baby is happy to find her after all the years. β™₯

  14. Rekha Rekha September 22, 2013

    Both are good ones. Loved them.

  15. Kajal Kajal September 22, 2013

    I loved this Corinne, especially the second one πŸ™‚

  16. Kalpana Solsi Kalpana Solsi September 22, 2013

    I loved the first one very much .

  17. Sakshi Nanda Sakshi Nanda September 22, 2013

    Wonderful. I’m trying to think which one I like better, but it’s impossible to pick. πŸ™‚

  18. Proactive Indian Proactive Indian September 22, 2013

    Good 55Fs!
    Is this your first shot at 55F?
    I found 55F a bit tough the first time I tried it, but later attempts were much easier and very enjoyable, almost addictive!

      • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | September 23, 2013

        Not my first, though I’m fairly new at it. Addictive is right!
        And about the sharing, you’re so welcome. Are you on Twitter? I don’t see your contact details on your blog.

  19. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury September 22, 2013

    Nice take on the WOW! πŸ™‚ (And if you’re wondering this was quick, I just got a pingback :-))

    Both 55-ers are sweet!

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | September 22, 2013

      Ah! I was wondering. 55 does mean you’ll keep getting pingbacks! Couldn’t resist this prompt.

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