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The Shadow Of Your Smile

 

My dearest love

I stood on the platform waving to you until your train was a speck in the horizon. I was so sad at your leaving but proud of your decision. I was filled with hope too.

I have asked the doctor to give you this when you come back. Those long years of addiction have taken their toll on me. You would not go if you knew how far gone I was. But I wanted you to get a chance at rehab.

Stay sober and keep smiling. I go in peace, taking with me the shadow of your smile.

 Yours always.

 

 

Written in response to the 100 Words On Saturday prompt on Write Tribe.

 

100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe

 

 

 

 


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Corinne Rodrigues, a writer, coach, and blogger from Secunderabad, India, shares insights on life, creativity, and wellness through her blogs Everyday Gyaan and The Frangipani Creative.

30 Comments on “The Shadow Of Your Smile

  1. What a beautiful story. You have touched a very sensitive topic. Lots to learn from you.

  2. What a beautiful story! your creativity is contagious and I am waiting to come up with something different for my next challenge.

  3. At least one of them is saved, thankfully or else it would have ended on a sad note!
    This story, it’s creative, unique and lovely. Truly… 🙂

  4. I remembered a movie when a man loves a woman ! anyway hitting rehabs is challenging
    good one

  5. I could visualize that. And my eyes filled up for no reason. What a pleasure it is to read everyone’s take on this particular prompt, isn’t it? 😀

  6. Addiction of any kind can be so destructive. Going to the rehab before its too late is the wisest decision. Loved the take on your prompt Corinne.

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