55-Fiction on Sunday? Who knows? It could become a habit. 😉
And before I knew I had hit ‘send’. I experienced disbelief at my decision. Then a sense of loss and finally relief. It was time to let go. Yes, we had had good times. But I didn’t need him any more. “Be happy” I whispered and pictured the little girl thrilled with her ‘new’ computer.
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And before I knew I had hit ‘send’. Would he respond? Was the profile picture what he really looked like? I couldn’t stop thinking of him. I had to know if he was the ‘one’. The last time I had seen him was when the nurse took him away from my arms. My little Roshan.
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Nice take on the WOW! 🙂 (And if you’re wondering this was quick, I just got a pingback :-))
Both 55-ers are sweet!
Ah! I was wondering. 55 does mean you’ll keep getting pingbacks! Couldn’t resist this prompt.
Good 55Fs!
Is this your first shot at 55F?
I found 55F a bit tough the first time I tried it, but later attempts were much easier and very enjoyable, almost addictive!
Thanks for sharing my post!
Not my first, though I’m fairly new at it. Addictive is right!
And about the sharing, you’re so welcome. Are you on Twitter? I don’t see your contact details on your blog.
@IndianProactive
Thank you. Following you now.
Wonderful. I’m trying to think which one I like better, but it’s impossible to pick. 🙂
Thanks, Sakshi.
I loved the first one very much .
Thanks, Kalpana!
I loved this Corinne, especially the second one 🙂
Both are good ones. Loved them.
I loved your story!! I hope her baby is happy to find her after all the years. ♥
Good job done, Corinne. I loved the second one more.
I so hope to write one soon. Missed my chance when Vidya gave a tutorial due to work pressures.
Some day soon. Till then, you all should do justice to her masterclass! 🙂
Very sweet 55ers…esp loved the second one! N 55 fiction on Sunday…yeah it could become a thing!! 🙂
Very sweet stories. Hard to pick which one I liked better – loved them both.
smart and sweet… loved the first one.
I like the first one as well
PhenoMenon
I can imagine the little girl’s happiness on seeing her new computer!! Loved both the 55ers! 🙂
Aww 🙂 Both such sweet pieces!
The WOW theme this week was indeed very tempting, but by the time I read the topic, the weekend was already over 😛
Couldn’t share your post on twitter! Wonder why :/
Both are lovely…but I liked first one at the first place…
You are so good at it. Loved both of them.
OMG the last one is so poigant .. the possiblities are unimaginable!
Loved both the letting go and the anticipation. Beautifully written. 🙂
Both of them are so sweet that they touched my heart. 🙂
Thanks, P. 🙂
Loved both the 55ers . Letting go is such a difficult thing isn’t it ? <3
Thanks, Sri. Yes, letting go is so hard, but always worth it!
Must be a tough one.