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Her Greatest Hit

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She gazed out of the window
Watching the traffic speed by
A middle-aged woman
With no ‘job’, yet doing the work she loved.
Not living in the house of her dreams
But certainly at home in love.
Not having conquered the world
But having overcome her own demons.
Not surrounded by fawning fans
But by significant others,
Who saw the real woman within
And loved her for who she was.
With no children of her own,
Yet nurturing many.

She smiled
Content at where she was
And who she had become.
“Life”, she thought,
“That’s my greatest hit!”

 

 

This is my response to The Writer’s Post Thursday Blog Hop hosted by Cairn Rodrigues.

 

Photo Credit: Jonathan D. Blundell via Compfight cc

24 Comments

  1. Melissa Melissa May 9, 2013

    I have lived my life ~ that’s how I’d like to think of myself a few years from now 🙂

    I truly love this Corinne!
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  2. Sridevi Datta Sridevi Datta April 28, 2013

    This is indeed so inspiring 🙂
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  3. Latha Latha April 24, 2013

    Simple and beautiful, Corinne. She is the woman of victory. A purely contended soul..:)

  4. ajiteja ajiteja April 23, 2013

    that was so lovely……
    And to reach the space of inner peace is like seeing heaven when alive…..

  5. Jocelyn Jocelyn April 23, 2013

    Beautiful words, Corinne! Felt comforted as though an angel herself spoke them.

  6. janu janu April 19, 2013

    Corinne, you are a hit!

  7. Dangerous Linda Dangerous Linda April 19, 2013

    Hi, Corinne! ~

    This seems like a poem about YOU, except you’re not middle-aged yet and I don’t know if you live in the house of your dreams — it looks quite magnificent from the pictures I’ve seen!

    I often say that the life I’m creating is my greatest work of art, which is in a similar vein 😉

  8. Anne Anne April 19, 2013

    Beautifully expressed, Corinne. And the last two lines say it all. Life indeed should be our greatest hit. This would make a great song.
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  9. Mary Stephenson Mary Stephenson April 19, 2013

    What an absolutely lovely poem. If we could all be so contented in life.
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  10. Anne Anne April 19, 2013

    Corinne, this was a home run for me. Beautiful!
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  11. Jas Jas April 18, 2013

    Truly wonderful Corinne. I am amazed at how you have put it.
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  12. Leah Leah April 18, 2013

    Corinne, this poem is splendid. It reflects so much contentment and such appreciation for the simple act of loving and being loved…being alive. Is this not what we all aim for. Well done soul-sister <3
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  13. Rachna Rachna April 18, 2013

    Beautifully put, Corinne! The woman has succeeded where most others fail, in life!
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