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Opposites Attract?

Opposites Attract?

She was in love with him. He showed no emotion.

Today….
“Can I take you for dinner?”
“Sure.”
“Pick you up at 7 ?”
“Where are we going?”
“A surprise. Dress casually.”

They stop at a house.
“Who lives here?”
“My parents. I want them to meet my future wife.”

She was grateful she had clearly misunderstood him.

“Do come and stay with us?”
“Are you sure?”
“Oh, yes!”
“Thanks!

Why had she invited Ramya? She had to clean, cook and take her sight-seeing.

Why had she accepted Padma’s invite? She had to buy her an expensive present. They had nothing in common though they were cousins.

Nothing in common? Both were real phony.

 

“The cops! Act naturally!”

“Talk is you’ve brought a young girl home.”
“She’s my niece, sir. She just got home from a party.”
“Girl, are you crying?”
“She had a fight with her friend.”

“Is this your Uncle?”
She nods.

The cop leaves.

He slaps her face hard.
“I’ll  give you something to cry about, you bitch.”

 

The reason I’m calling this post Opposites Attract is because the prompt requires you to include a sentence with opposite words in it – underlined in my three 55ers above. 

 

 

 

 

24 Comments

  1. Shiva Shiva August 14, 2013

    Mrs 55…you are doing great!!! Loved the play of words…I dun read but see your stories…

  2. Rajlakshmi Rajlakshmi August 12, 2013

    loved all of the… well written ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Sheela Sheela August 11, 2013

    All three written wonderfully….loved the way of presentation…!

  4. AlkaGurha AlkaGurha August 11, 2013

    You are good at it. All 3 are intriguing but I can not forget your previous story about the ‘Toy Train’.

  5. Richa Singh Richa Singh August 11, 2013

    Wow! You took the theme to a next level. You wrote a total of 3 55ers! I am so impressed Corinne. I am still struggling with one!!

    Wonderful stuff!!

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 11, 2013

      Richa – the one complaint my English teachers had was with regard to the brevity of my answers. So now, I’m in my element! ๐Ÿ˜‰

  6. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury August 11, 2013

    You’re a budding movie script writer, you know? I love the way you 55-fiction-ed the WOW prompt.

    Very nice! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 11, 2013

      Haha…I have no such illusions, Vidya. Just enjoying writing in this form – thank you!

  7. Kajal Kajal August 11, 2013

    Nice ones indeed. Great 55ers. Good luck!

  8. Diana Pinto Diana Pinto August 11, 2013

    Loved all the three 55ers . All the best for the WOW contest !!

  9. Kalpana Solsi Kalpana Solsi August 11, 2013

    The first one is so so so nice.loved all your masterpieces.

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 11, 2013

      Thanks, Kalpana. The third one is what my heart went with.

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