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The Dentist’s Assistant

 

“Isn’t staring down people’s mouths awful?” I asked

“I’m doing my bit for humanity after all. See that tooth there? It’s rotten. Without me, the dentist would never know”, says the lamp proudly.

 

 

 

 

The Dentist’s Assistant  is in response to the Trifecta Writing Challenge : Write a 33-word piece that uses the word ‘tooth’

 

31 Comments

  1. Shilpa Garg Shilpa Garg August 25, 2013

    33 words!! This is something new!! And you did wrote a fabulous story in 33 words!! Cool 🙂

  2. Roshni Roshni August 17, 2013

    Anything pertaining to the dentist makes me sweat now!! 😛

  3. Pixie Pixie August 16, 2013

    haha!
    Brilliant twist! 😀

  4. Shail Shail August 16, 2013

    Bravo, Corinne! 33 words eh? Quite a challenge, that.

  5. Roshan R Roshan R August 15, 2013

    Stylish! Very cool twist to that one. Honestly, one I didnt think of while reading the title and first line.

  6. afshan afshan August 12, 2013

    I feel I may not even write my name in 33 words 😛 I know a bad joke but this is really challenging , and a convo between patient and lamp is unique

  7. Sheela Sheela August 12, 2013

    Oh dear! 33 words………and you managed to create humorous piece with a word ‘TOOTH’….Wonderful job!!! 🙂

  8. Kalpana Solsi Kalpana Solsi August 12, 2013

    Corinne, loved this. and only 33 words.unbelievable.

  9. C. Suresh C. Suresh August 12, 2013

    Even lamps need someone to throw light on what they do 🙂

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 13, 2013

      Oh yes, I’m the lamp’s assistant, Suresh! 😉

  10. Rachna Rachna August 12, 2013

    33 words! It keeps getting shorter and shorter :).

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 13, 2013

      Oh yes, Rachna. The shorter the better for me! 😉

  11. JannaTWrites JannaTWrites August 12, 2013

    I like the twist in this – I thought the conversation was with the hygienist.

  12. Kajal Kajal August 12, 2013

    Ha! I actually thought the question was meant for the dentist. I liked this piece. 33 words? That’s some challenge. I find it hard to express in 55er. This is superb!

    • Corinne Rodrigues Corinne Rodrigues August 12, 2013

      Thanks, Kajal. Like I mentioned to Richa, my English teachers always found fault with my brevity – now who’s having the last laugh? 😉

  13. Cobbie's World Cobbie's World August 12, 2013

    All hail the bright lights than illuminate the way forward. Nice, airy piece. Thanks for sharing our great work.

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 13, 2013

      Ah yes, what would we be without the light. I love Trifecta – so glad I found it!

  14. Tess Tess August 12, 2013

    Geez, that lamp is smart. Imaginative take on the challenge.

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 12, 2013

      Oh yes, that’s one hot lamp! 😉 Thank you, Tess.

  15. Jo-Anne Teal Jo-Anne Teal August 12, 2013

    Now THAT is an interesting POV! I had never considered things from the lamp’s perspective :))

  16. Valerie Valerie August 12, 2013

    I love this! It’s a fun twist on the prompt, and lamps everywhere are thanking you right now for finally giving them the recognition they deserve! Well done!

    • CorinneRodrigues CorinneRodrigues Post author | August 12, 2013

      I try to do my best for the lamps whenever I can, Valerie! 😉 Thank you – I so enjoyed writing this.

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